First draft feedback

Chris: I feel that the movie trailer inst as exciting as it should be therefore i get distracted and feel the need to look away and look at other things that are more interesting. However, I feel that the story line is strong and this could be easily changed.

Ben: I think that it is too short to be a movie trailer and needs to be made longer and this could be done in a variety of ways: by adding more shots, adding more effects, having still pictures and many more.

Leanne: I think that what both chris and ben have said is spot on and if these changes are made then i will be excited and interested to go and watch the full movie.