I have resulted in asking people what they think of my movie trailer second draft. This is because at the minute it isn't very good as it isn't scary enough or even as long. I am going to ask for feedback from the pupils in my class like I have done throughout the whole of the project because they know what I am going and also they are my target audience of the movie trailer that I am making meaning that they know what they like and also what makes a good movie trailer.
Chris Percival.
To improve your movie trailer, I would cut certain bits out and add other clips in, this is because at one point in the trailer, it shows Leanne, running away and it then cuts to the killer, I think before she screams it should show a quick clip of the killer, this will make it make sense. Also I think that you could maybe use 2 soundtracks to tell a better story.
Ben Murphy.
Overall, I think that the trailer has been well thought through with the storyline, setting and camera shot. One thing that would improve the trailer is the cutting between scenes. For example at one point Chris is not already running when the trailer cuts to the scene. To edit this, maybe the clip could be shortened.
Harry Pickford.
I think that becky could improve her movie trailer by making the trailer longer so it looks more professional. Also I think that there should be two types of music such as an upbeat soundtrack or a sad one.
Mr Taylor
Fonts - need to be sophisticated. Current font could be mistaken for a spoof.
Soundtrack - add variety. When antagonist appears cuts should be quicker and tempo of music should increase.
Cuts - more pace needed!
Footage from the remainder of the film - add short clips / shots from the 'rest' of the film to make it more like an authentic trailer.
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