I am creating another plot summary because when I made my second draft of my animatic i thought that I was telling too much of the story. I am keeping the beginning the same and just changing the ending.
- A long shot of the girls getting ready in a bedroom and packing for going camping (This will have a happy backing track to show that they are rearing to go.
- A group of girls trying to put a tent up in the darkness or just when it starts to go dark in nice clothes. (This shows that they are not used to going camping.
- Spooky noises of branches cracking and an owl making noises.
- Quick shots of lots of things happening that are bad to build up the tension
- Shadow of the man which will be a long shot to show his build and how scary he looks
- Close up of the knife to show the weapon that he is carrying.
- One girl goes to get some fire wood
- Close up of quick shots changing between both of their face expressions to show that she is scared and he is angry and ready to kill
- Quick shots to show that the girl has seen that the man has followed her and her running away and him chasing her
- Then a black screen to show that something has happened and then a backing track of sad music
- A close up and quick shot of the mans shoe on the floor and then the girls shoe walking away. These will be both quick shot so the audience will only get a glimpse. This will be the twist in my movie.
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