New font feedback

Chris
The title looks better than before because it suits the genre better and stands out more, it also looks far more professional than the first font.

Emily
I think that it is an improvement to change the font. This one now is much more effective and I personally like the letter 'E' backwards. I also like the font colour being red because it is much more terrifiing.

Miss Walton
Colour is better suited to the genre and the overall effect is more modern and subtle than the look of the other, which was perhaps a little dated. The block lettering is also more powerful and I like the 'slashed' effect of it.

Changed my font

I have changed my font because I received a comment of Mr Taylor that he thought my font that i have already got wouldn't be taken seriously. I have now picked a different font which I think looks a lot better and doesn't look stupid. I now think that this font looks sophisticated. This is the colour that I will be using for the font still as I think it looks good and it represent blood.

Looking at my Feedback....

From the feedback that i have received i am going to take it on board and make the changes to see what happens. I have got to remember that the feedback i have received is from my target audience so they will know what they want to see in a horror.

Feedback to my second draft

I have resulted in asking people what they think of my movie trailer second draft. This is because at the minute it isn't very good as it isn't scary enough or even as long. I am going to ask for feedback from the pupils in my class like I have done throughout the whole of the project because they know what I am going and also they are my target audience of the movie trailer that I am making meaning that they know what they like and also what makes a good movie trailer.

Chris Percival.
To improve your movie trailer, I would cut certain bits out and add other clips in, this is because at one point in the trailer, it shows Leanne, running away and it then cuts to the killer, I think before she screams it should show a quick clip of the killer, this will make it make sense. Also I think that you could maybe use 2 soundtracks to tell a better story.

Ben Murphy.
Overall, I think that the trailer has been well thought through with the storyline, setting and camera shot. One thing that would improve the trailer is the cutting between scenes. For example at one point Chris is not already running when the trailer cuts to the scene. To edit this, maybe the clip could be shortened.

Harry Pickford.
I think that becky could improve her movie trailer by making the trailer longer so it looks more professional. Also I think that there should be two types of music such as an upbeat soundtrack or a sad one.

Mr Taylor

Fonts - need to be sophisticated. Current font could be mistaken for a spoof.

Soundtrack - add variety. When antagonist appears cuts should be quicker and tempo of music should increase.

Cuts - more pace needed!

Footage from the remainder of the film - add short clips / shots from the 'rest' of the film to make it more like an authentic trailer.

Slasher Draft 2

Slasher Draft 2 from Rebecca Mahan on Vimeo.

I am having trouble with timing.

With my movie trailer I feel that i am having a bit of trouble with the timing and I have a feeling that it is going to be too short. I still need to put a proper filming company at the beginning of the trailer then I am going to sit down and analise where I can fit more footage into the movie trailer to make it look better.

Video Diary 2